Ibtadaiya bht umda likha hay , valentine pr likhay gaey mazameen sy bht mukhtaliq style hay ab taj jitney bhi mazameen likhey gaey sab ka style or tarz e tehreer aik jesa hota hay sab aik jesey waqiyat hi code krtey hain jo parh parh kr yaad ho gaey . Ap ki tehreer sy sy juda hay naey andaz main laikin ending theek nahin hui yun lagta hay k dang tapao sy kaam liya hay matlab jaan churraney ki koshish ki hay ... Allah karey zour qalam aur ziyada
boht jazkaAllah bro!! itny tafsili cmnt ka..g ending zara short karnay k chakr main kuch zada hi short ho gai.asil main last time kuch loogo ny kaha tha k mera blog , blog nahi article lagta hai lehaza iss br blog hi likhnay ki koshsh ki thi...D
Very well done Yusra!
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Deletegue one or wakai shyed hum sirf zindagi ko enjkoy karne k shauk main jie ja rhai hian..
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ReplyDeleteIbtadaiya bht umda likha hay , valentine pr likhay gaey mazameen sy bht mukhtaliq style hay ab taj jitney bhi mazameen likhey gaey sab ka style or tarz e tehreer aik jesa hota hay sab aik jesey waqiyat hi code krtey hain jo parh parh kr yaad ho gaey . Ap ki tehreer sy sy juda hay naey andaz main laikin ending theek nahin hui yun lagta hay k dang tapao sy kaam liya hay matlab jaan churraney ki koshish ki hay ... Allah karey zour qalam aur ziyada
ReplyDeleteboht jazkaAllah bro!! itny tafsili cmnt ka..g ending zara short karnay k chakr main kuch zada hi short ho gai.asil main last time kuch loogo ny kaha tha k mera blog , blog nahi article lagta hai lehaza iss br blog hi likhnay ki koshsh ki thi...D
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har lihaz se acha hai...bus ak ghulti hai "manaya jany wala wo din" :P
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Yusraa!!!!
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bohttt jazakAllah sweety:) wesay mashaAllah app tou khud cheeti hain blog writing ki..:)
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Deleteyusra,bht aala likha riwayiti "anti valentine's day" articles n blogs se hat kr..muje b seekhne ka mauqa mila.jazak ALLAH.
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